Σάββατο, Μαΐου 20, 2006

between the lines

Sketch=a copy with emotions

Working out the rhymes –
Sometimes it’s hard to read between
the lines.
Started to think about givin’ in
Or better yet handin’ out the key but
then felt depressed at the idea of running off copies
- see-through thrills.

Sitting comfortably in the livin’ room of an inaction,
decided to might as well force them to forge their way in –
allowing the unguaranteed reaction that doesn’t sit still.

Words, meanwhile, hit with force
And so I wish silence could take over and
Just embrace all the ones I deeply care for
Innuendos an’ – oh well – empty lines flying over,
Erasing a good deal of fertile will,
Please don’t make me weep because
I can’t take the grief.
(Words may sound locked but tell me can anyone say they have the code?)

amy

5 Comments:

Blogger suigenerisav said...

Sweet & sour.
Touching as well..

Μην παραιτηθείς όμως από την αναζήτηση στην κατακλείδα..
Το ξεκλείδωμα των λέξεων και κυρίως των συναισθημάτων-αυτό νοηματοδοτεί και το παιχνίδι-ταξίδι της ύπαρξης.
;-)

2:50 π.μ.

 
Blogger escamoteur said...

Maybe just stay local with them as things; wrapped in.

Exercise:
Stay at "Mammon calls upon thee"
under
"Train", Shiberu Umebayashi

Maybe

7:21 π.μ.

 
Anonymous amy said...

@suigenerisav,
Πιθανότατα έχεις δίκιο!

@escamoteur,
I guess your juggling allusions are supposed to lead somewhere but I'm afraid we're transmitting different signals because I don't understand your teaching (?) hints.

11:55 π.μ.

 
Blogger escamoteur said...

Dear X (Amy),
I agree; it surely seems I cannot write things properly.
Holly mother, I do not (mean to) teach; I admit that yet another misfortunate word was "exercise" - instead of pro-position, self-appointment (I myself was doing that exercise at the time).
I simply wanted to give an answer (what answer re file? do we have to read footnotes for just a line of yours?) to your question (honestly, can you read re file? Afto elega? etc.).
Sorry - too many bad or corrupted data lead to one thing, and one thing only: the abuse of your space.
Tres amicalement

2:40 π.μ.

 
Blogger escamoteur said...

I would like to excuse myself,
Saying that,
There are structures you may be interested in
And no doubt worthwhile to pursue,
But
I’ve been down this road, and this is what makes me sound (unstable) like a teacher
[the next best thing, at least in my book, is probably “myrizoun oi masxales sou”]
And… mmm…
No way I could get it right
(I spare you this signal)
Any way, with all my heart,
Be happy!

3:26 π.μ.

 

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